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echomikeromeo Started conversation Oct 14, 2006
Hi Elentari
I've subbed your entry and it can be found at A15684500. Do take a look - I hope to receive your seal of approval on the entry!
subbing 'Advice On Organising a Film Night'
Elentari Posted Oct 14, 2006
I like!
One thing, and this was probably me:
"Talking can add to the experience — ridiculing a bad film, for example, can make it worth watching — or detract from it — in many cases, someone talking while you're watching a really great film is exceedingly irritating."
Too many dashes? How about
"Talking can add to the experience — ridiculing a bad film, for example, can make it worth watching. However, in many cases, someone talking while you're watching a really great film is exceedingly irritating."
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echomikeromeo Posted Oct 14, 2006
Thanks, I do like that better. I've substituted it and will return the entry now.
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