h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello! I am in the process of subbing your entry, and thought I'd hive you a shout in case there's anything you want changed/added. I've not done much at all (as very little needed to be done). Fixed two typos, rearranged two sentences and added five or so links. It's at A7715315 - let me know if everything's OK with you and if it is I'll send it back to the editors.

David

I should also say that I found it very interesting.

And also that I was planning to give you a shout rather than to hive you a shout.

I think it's fine except that this: "and to a dramatic way to destroy the power of the Order – they had great influence."

should be "and a dramatic way to destroy the power of the Order – they had great influence.

Actually, there's this to, but it's my fault.

Can you change "Virtually all of the sources we have deal with male homosexuality" (1st line of the lesbianism section) to "Virtually all of the surviving sources deal with male homosexuality".

Thanks very much!

Both fixed. I'll give it another look over the weekend and send it back to the editors on Monday at the latest. Thanks, David.

Thanks!