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Post 1

SomeMuppet

Hiya M8

Just read the bogus journey piece you did in PR and I have a couple of suggestions for you (meant in the best possible way) I will post something in the PR thread later

Copy and paste your article into word and run it through the spell checker (there were a couple that I noticed but can't remember them now.)

Also think about the use of subheaders to split up the article (you kindof have them but guideml them)

It'll just stop those 2 nitpicks getting in the way of other constructive feedback for the piece that I'd like to see get EG statussmiley - ok


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Post 2

AngelicWitch (ACE)

It doesn't matter because the sub editors will sort out any spelling mistakes......


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Post 3

SomeMuppet

Hi Angelicwitch

Yeah they will, but it doesn't hurt to put the piecec through a spellchecker anyway. A lot of the initial comments in PR tend to be on the obvious and then it gets to the more interesting stuff. I was just giving HPB a heads up on it really.

Hows your piece on we are what we eat going, I notice you're still not happy with it yourself yet?


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Post 4

SomeMuppet

Oops sorry wrong witch smiley - blush

My bad, I mistook you for Webwitch theresmiley - blush


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Post 5

[...]

Do you do what Groundskeeper Willy says in the Simpsons in the Scotchtober Fest...

"We wear the kilt for casual daily wear, but on special occasions we wear a full length sequin gown..."


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Post 6

AngelicWitch (ACE)

its okay!! but the spell checkers , do they job!! lolx


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Post 7

SomeMuppet

HPB I will only wear the sequin gown if you pay me £5000 on Saturdaysmiley - laugh


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Post 8

[...]

Why should pay? It's your culture!


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Post 9

AngelicWitch (ACE)

What you would only wear the sequin kilt for £5000? I thought you would have went out and said the full lot lolx


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Post 10

[...]

A sequin gown is quite different from a sequin kilt...

One makes you look like a woman and the other makes you look like Buck's Fizz....


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Post 11

SomeMuppet

no one makes the sheep laugh, the other makes the sheep afraidsmiley - laugh


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Post 12

[...]

I'm not sure... a low wind would scare anyone wit both!


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Post 13

SomeMuppet

depends how low.

How are you tonight m8?


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Post 14

[...]

Low enough that there'd be no point in standing on a grate!

Still breathing. I suppose that's a good thing... for me anyway!


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Post 15

SomeMuppet

what's up?


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Post 16

[...]

Do you mean 'what am I doing?' or 'You sound suicidal, what's the matter?'

'Cause I'm not the latter!


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Post 17

SomeMuppet

I just mean what's up,

you just seemed peeved, (I didn't think you sounded suicidal)


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Post 18

[...]

No, no.. I'm fine... going insane trying to sort out my Discworld entries!


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Post 19

SomeMuppet

well I am pee'd off because I am still at work. Was out havng a nice drink when I got called back in


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Post 20

[...]

Doing...?


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