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Hiya Wyatt - you know the drill

A20075005

I'll start subbing as soon as I can

<< or immerse yourself in important-looking housework such as hoovering, washing or doing the laundry >>

washing-up ??

(washing is personal in the UK, washing-up is doing the dishes)



<> Do you mean Angelina?



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You're already talking about "people you don't like" under a huge umbrella. Possibly change to "people you *just* don't like" (I'd put it in italics for emphasis)



<> can I put "powder" in there?

Beatrice's comments appear to have been missed in PR, I've added her quote as a blockquote because it's perfect for the entry on how to avoid pesky locals. I also added her comment about non-avoidance of an ex- if you have children together, but as a footnote to your introduction (ex-boyfriend/girlfriend). As this is a FM rescue I've added her as co-author, as you added Milos, (if it was a solo effort on your part I would stick 'em in the credits tag)

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Er, I think that would sound better as "You could lock yourself in the bathroom and have a nice bubble bath, which is also a great stress reliever."

Sure, go ahead with all those

OK I am done. I added a final sentence to finish it off a little better, I hope you approve

If you'll OK the changes I'll return to Eds

For "disguised celebrity" I linked to Madonna. Are you happy with that? I can change it to Elton John, if you like

Looks great, just one thing, in the Avoiding People at Home....

...and is the best option open to you: For the older....

I think there should be a period, not colon.


Thanks!

Changed

I'll return it to the Eds then



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