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I've subbed it and, apart from just one or two typos, it's fine and reads very well.

Can you cast your eye over it before I submit it back to the Eds please?

Link to this Entry: A16413699... Oh! I see you're Subbing that too!

'If anyone's going to bugger it up, it's going to be us.' > Shouldn't the period be on the outside of the quotation mark? I don't know if that's the way I wrote it, or something you changed...

And a recent development in his career. Add this to the music section, after 'Jeeves and Wooster, A Bit of Fry and Laurie, and even House....'

He also performed a (very vague) protest song on the guitar and harmonica when he hosted Saturday Night Live in 2006.

At the end, throw in 'at the time of writing, Hugh lives in Los Angles....


Errr... that's it, I think. Thanks, Vicki

Sorry about the delay here, but I have now done those alterations.

Could you check them for me to make sure you're happy with them before I return it to the Eds?

Thanks hun

VV

Erm, at the end, it now says he lives in LA twice. Just replace it with this:

"At the time of writing, Hugh splits his time living in Los Angles and London."

And in the music section, add the bit about SNL right after the part at the beginning of the paragraph about how he has played music in his other shows. I think that's the second sentence. And erase 'new development in his career'

I think that's it, thanks for your work. and no problem about the delay.

Right. I "think" I've got it how you want it.

That's it exactly! 'Saturday Night Live' needs to be italics, though.

That's it, I think, thanks a lot.

I dundid it!!!

Yay! A BLOB

Oh, Fantastic!!