h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

...is about to be sub edited by me. I'll keep you posted about any changes, but I don't envisage doing too much.

Cheers

DogManStar

Thanks.

OK, I'm pretty much finished. Didn't change a great deal of the syntax, but put some sub headers in to break up the text block, and added some links. It's here A884423 if you want to have a quick look before I send it on.

Cheers

DMS

thanks, the article looks better now. you have done a great job. I wonder if the following sentence should change as follows:

from :

It is, according to Andy Powell, 'not quite a concept' album but has a kind of mystical and medieval feel to it with plenty of biblical and prophetic references in the lyrics.

to something like :

It is, according to Andy Powell, 'not quite a concept' album but with plenty of biblical and prophetic references throughout the lyrics and a robed and helmeted warrior on the cover, there is definately an overall mystical and medieval feel to it.

Don't know why but that sentence just never seems to come out right. I know what I want to say but can't quite get the right words in the right order. No big deal if you don't see the need to change it.

Thanks again.