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UnderGuide Gem Polisher Calling....

Post 1

Trin Tragula

Hello there! I've just finished polishing your 'Neverno' for the UnderGuide and the UG version is here:

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As you'll see, I've not really interfered with the text, though it's a bit more spaced out now.

The two main changes are the title - where I've removed 'a fictional tale [probably]' - and the note at the end - which I've removed completely.

Just because I don't think you need either of them and they end up getting in the way. We remove a lot of 'a short story'-type subtitles when things go into the UG - because readers will know this already - but the note similarly... it just seemed a bit too heavy-handed, if you know what I mean? Good stories can be left to speak for themselves and this one should be, I think.

However - this is the UnderGuide and you're the boss. So if there's anything you'd like putting back or altering further, please shout out smiley - smiley


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Post 2

cupati

I know, I don't know why I put the note in in the first place. And yes, the fictional tale [probably] was purely advertising.


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Post 3

cupati

Squee! *bouncebouncebounce* Squee!

Thankyou!


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Post 4

Trin Tragula

Not at all, you're very welcome! smiley - ok

Look forward to seeing this on the Front Page smiley - smiley


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Post 5

cupati

So do I! smiley - winkeye


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