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echomikeromeo Started conversation Nov 21, 2006
Hi Niwt
I've sub-edited your entry on white-tailed spiders and it can be found at A17389452. If you'd like to check it out and make sure everything looks all right, that would be excellent.
subbing 'White-tailed Spiders'
. Posted Nov 24, 2006
Thanks for dropping by, it looks OK to me, thanks for adding a footnote! 
Just one thing, a problem with wot I wrote...
"There are faint white spots near the top of the abdomen (which is usually only able to be seen in juveniles)"
Do you think you might be able to change it to:
"There are faint white spots near the top of the abdomen (usually only visible in juveniles)"
Sounds a little better...
Thanks for being the sub!
subbing 'White-tailed Spiders'
echomikeromeo Posted Nov 25, 2006
You're right, that does sound better.
I'll return this to the eds now - nice job!
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