h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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Well, I found some edits, all of which are my fault and not yours. However, I'm running short of time right now, can I post you a list in the morning?

Gee, did I say *this* morning? What I meant was tomorrow morning...

I tried working on this several times today and kept getting sidetracked by work. I promise I'll have edits ready for you tomorrow (after 7:00 am cdt )

Finally! Sorry for the delay.

Edits... yes:
... in the Grants Farm sentence (3rd para in Entertain header) there are two 'also's, can you remove the second one?

... in the Shop 'Til You Drop header, I'm afraid it sounds like there isn't anywhere to spend money - heaven forbid! Can you add this third paragraph: "Don't let it be said you can't go shopping in St Louis, though. There are several large shopping malls in the area, as well as many botiques and specialty shops. There just isn't a shopping district like you might find in other large cities."

... in the Metro Area header, second paragraph, can you add 'County' to 'St Louis [County] Parks Department', and 'rail' here: "...features over one hundred train engines and [rail] cars..." to differentiate it from the automotive cars also on display?

Thanks!

Okay, hows it look now?

Grant's Farm sentence, again (still my fault, though) -
"Grant's Farm is also south of downtown on Gravois Road, and offers free riding tours of the grounds, and is the home of the Anheuser-Busch Clydesdale Horses." >> remove the first 'and'

And, now that I'm thinking about it, 'riding tours' sounds to me like horseback riding; actually the tours are on trams. Can we change that to 'free tram tours'?

Other than that, looks fab. Thanks Wyatt!

Now how's it look?

Fantastic!

Thanks again!

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