h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Mala

I've had very little to correct on your astonishing entry on tensegrity structures: see A40513295 for the sub-edited version.

Have a final look to see if there's anything else you can spot, but if I don't hear from you, I'll return it to the Eds shortly.

Icy

Can't really think of anything. Unless you want to link "Zen approach" to this? A579675

Thanks for subbing!

Thanks Mala - I won't bother with that link - it's all about orange peeling rather than Zen.

See you on the Front Page!

While I've got you handy... I'm working on the HP sauce one - is there any reason the French text is so big? It's about 16 point compared to the rest at 10 point or so.

Well, I used that construct as I wanted to preserve the line breaks from the way as it's printed on the tall, narrow bottle label. Yes, it seems to come out in an outsized font, but, to be honest, it doesn't bother me - I quite like it.

I suggest you just flag it to the Eds and let them decide.

It just gives it an exaggerated importance...

You could remove the italics, as in A32016692

That seems to reduce the impact a bit.

I'll think about how to do it. That might be a start, though...