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Subbing 'Dipstick'
Wyatt Started conversation Jul 26, 2006
Hi, there. I have Sub-edited your 'Dipstick' Entry, and if you could take a look at it and make sure everything is alright with you, that would be great. The subbed version is right here: A1334660
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Subbing 'Dipstick'
Wyatt Posted Jul 27, 2006
I see looks like you haven't been around in a while, so I will go ahead and return it.
Subbing 'Dipstick'
neongreencat Posted Aug 3, 2006
Hi. Sorry for the delay.
The Entry looks fine but for a few small details:
Under Engine Oil, 'adding a quart of oil' should change to liter for consistancy.
Under Adding Fluids, 'Don't panic if it's a little bit under.' might be better, 'Don't panic if it's a little bit over or under.'
I hope you haven't lost interest completely, I see you are pretty busy! Let me know if you need anything else.
ng
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