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Eusebio - squad number 11

I am about to submit a project to the University.
I aim to complete a history of the Football World Cup, and as you are a footy fan, albeit Swindon Town smiley - winkeye, I was wondering if you would like to be my sub-editor?

Cheers smiley - biggrin


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NexusSeven

Sure thing! smiley - smiley

Just let me know as and when you need me to cast my eye over anything... smiley - smiley


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Eusebio - squad number 11

Great smiley - biggrin
1930 is up and ready ...
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A561791

let me know what you think smiley - ok

PS - The reference in the footnote as well as the formation of FIFA will be covered in the 'history of the world cup' entry.


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Eusebio - squad number 11

smiley - biggrin

1934 is also ready!
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A561809

smiley - ok


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Post 5

Eusebio - squad number 11

smiley - biggrin

1938 is ready too!

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A561818

smiley - ok


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NexusSeven

smiley - ok Great stuff! Very nicely done... I guess that there'll be more actual copy in the later world cups, once you begin to approach the present day. You might have to explain a couple of little things, like what 'aet' means, for those who are not particularly au fait with the terminology of the Beautiful Game. smiley - winkeye

One slight style point - don't use the tag, as it will be taken out. If you feel you need to create a new paragraph, use the ... tags. smiley - smiley

And the fewer footnotes, the better. Not that you've used too many at all - far from it; however, I think the common Guide policy is to try to put sub-clauses in parenthetical commas, like this, rather than use footnotes or brackets (like this) because it reads a little better. smiley - smiley

Keep up the good work - it looks fantastic so far - pithy and to the point; I can't wait til we get to Fontaine et al. smiley - smileysmiley - ok


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Eusebio - squad number 11

Hi!
If you want to check out the 1930, 1934 and 1938 entries they have been updated (using wherever possible!)


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