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helga danielsen Started conversation Jul 17, 2005
Hello Paul, I lost the thread where you and Michael discuss the changes in Death of a husband. I answered him first and then could not get back to the conversation, so I am using this way. Hope, you don't mind! Thank you for the changes made in paragr. 10, lines 4, 5, 6. I liked your way out of the had hads. Line 16 O.K. too.
Sorry, but paragr. 11, line 24 and 25 still need to be changed. They are two (separated) and somehow they got together. 25 is supposed to be: Secretly fishing for the secret.
The subtitle of "The death of a husband" is "The presence of love"
All this done, I am happy.
P.S. I like your space. There are some very profound observations as you well know. And thanks for the link of the birthday date. Mine is March 16. There must be something about astrology because I think it describes me well. Have a nice Sunday. F
Lost thread, ugh!
Pdmatthew - Probably In a corner somewhere with a guitar Posted Jul 17, 2005
BTW just to be clear I'm your polisher, Michaels just a person that types in AWW that really likes your poem. To put it this way, more than one person don't normally comment on the polishing process but, he liked it so much he felt he had to 
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helga danielsen Posted Jul 18, 2005
O.K. I got that. Do you mind answering one more question? There was a Jodan who said he'd scream if I did not post my piece on the AWW. What is AWW and should everything I write be posted there?
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helga danielsen Posted Jul 18, 2005
O.K. I looked it all up AWW etc. so don't bother to answer me, please. After my piece it says "remove" does that mean somebody has changed their mind about it?
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Pdmatthew - Probably In a corner somewhere with a guitar Posted Jul 18, 2005
Please do not click remove, thats just if you want to get rid of your peice. I may ask you (not yet) but I may ask you to remove if from AWW after its in the Underguide. Thats just to clear up space after theres no need for it to be in there after its been accepted. Trust me noone will change their mind, noone can, its going to be an Underguide entry
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