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Subbing Mary Poppins
Gnomon - time to move on Started conversation Oct 15, 2012
Hi GB. I'm sub-editing "Mary Poppins" at A87773926.
In the second paragraph of the section "The Story", you say that Mr Banks has already left for work. Then you say that Mr Banks asks for the applicants for the job of nanny to be shown in. These two facts don't match.
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Subbing Mary Poppins
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Oct 15, 2012
Hi Gnomon. I chopped and changed it around so many times
I think: The next day, Mrs Banks is going out to meet Mrs Pankhurst and Mr Banks has already left for work.
should be:
The next day, Mrs Banks is going out to meet Mrs Pankhurst.
Subbing Mary Poppins
Gnomon - time to move on Posted Oct 15, 2012
I could, of course, get out the old video and play through it to see what happened. But I'd rather not.
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