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Leo Started conversation Sep 19, 2006
Hi, when you get back, can you pop down this-away and approve your entry?
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Deep Doo Doo Posted Oct 9, 2006
I'll give this a good look over as soon as I get a chance Leo (probably tomorrow) and then I'll get back to you. 
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Deep Doo Doo Posted Oct 12, 2006
Sorry Leo, I've still not had a chance to looks at this properly. I've had a quick look and there are some things I'm not 100% happy with, so I will need to do a proper comparison and come back to you.
At the moment I'm up to my ears in catching up with things after my extended break and there are a million and one things I need to do for the wedding. I've also just sold my house on Monday, so there's lots of people to contact and paperwork to be done. Oh, and I've still not done my tax return which should have been with the authorities by the end of September. 
So, can you give me another day or so? I will get it done - I promise! 
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Deep Doo Doo Posted Oct 17, 2006
Er, to answer though - I'm far too big and important, so that's why I never noticed!
The reality is, I'm getting an earbashing. 'Er indoors is givin' me grief - as soon as I can sort this blinkin wedding palava, I'll get on to it. At the moment my life is not my own - but:
1) I declare that I love her
2) I will do stuff and she will be happy
3) If she's not, I declare that she will be
4) If she's not, I still declare that she will be and I will get out of bed
5) If she's still not, I declare that I'm stumped
6) If she's stil not, then it's all off. Are you still available as a young single woman?
Er, Leo, tomoz OK with you?
Promise, I'll do it.
If I don't, send it back to the Ed's, and I'll rant and rave in EF and rubbish you - I will, I will...
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Leo Posted Oct 18, 2006
I'm available, but not for men who can't figure out how to please a woman.
That said, tommorow is just fine cuz I don't have too much time in RL myself. I just don't want to feel like I'm lazing around too much.
Oh, and good luck. 
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Deep Doo Doo Posted Oct 19, 2006
Right then Leo, after a huge and totally unnecessary delay, there are only a couple of changes.
Initially, when I read the polished Entry a while back, I wasn't too happy with some of the changes you'd made. To be honest, I felt as if you had just changed some of the text to your own wording which took away some of my writing style. Having looked at it again on a number of occasions, I don't feel the same way about it - in fact one or two of the reworded bits help to explain things better, so well done!
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Seems to be a problem with the comma after 'it'. Also, as I'm typing this my Google spellchecker is suggesting that 'webpage' is incorrect and is offering 'web page' or 'web-page' as alternatives. The spellchecker in MS Word never picked it up though. You may like to check.
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Can this revert to the original, since it's now factually incorrect? It's not possible to create a work of art because of the file size - so stating that this is not necessary is misleading.
I think that's all. Thanks for your time and your patience! 
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