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Aviators Part 2

Post 1

Icy North

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Thanks Shreck. smiley - smiley

I prefer the bold highlighting for Rogers, Neveu, etc in the two final sections, as they don't really merit headers/subheaders, but it's good to be able to pick out the names.

I know there are many footnotes, but are they particularly intrusive, in what is intended to be a compact fact-filled entry?

I suppose it's your call in the end.

smiley - cheers Icy


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Post 2

SchrEck Inc.

Hi Icy,

I'm afraid boldface is against house style, except in dotted lists, like

. *Ginette Neveu* - The French virtuoso violinist and her pianist brother [...]
. *Jacques Thibaud* - Four years later, on 1 September, 1953, another [...]

So I could either leave it as it is or put the last paras into a list - what do you think?

And I was going to leave the footnotes in, either. Footnotes are exactly thought for this type of info, it's just that there are more footnotes than usual in your entry. smiley - smiley


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Post 3

Icy North

I've just tested it, and I think I prefer the dotted list with bold intros, as you mentioned.

Thanks for leaving the footnotes. smiley - ok


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Post 4

SchrEck Inc.

Done! smiley - ok


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Post 5

Icy North

Looks good smiley - ok

Are you going to do the same for the previous section (Paul Jefferys and Stan Rogers)? smiley - smiley


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Post 6

SchrEck Inc.

Ah, of course! Anything else?


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Post 7

Icy North

Nope, that'll do - nice editing job! smiley - ok


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Post 8

SchrEck Inc.

smiley - bubbly


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