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I was about to make some pre-Subbing changes to my entry on Day of Defeat (A963353; edited version at A1026280) when some impatient Scout went and picked it.

Anyway... I've made the changes, and posted a list of them in the Peer Review forum (now hanging off the article of course). Some of the changes are to bring the article up to date with DoD 1.0, which comes out next Tuesday. Since I might be wrong about some details, I'd like to play the game first - a week should do.

TTFN

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Hey Pete,

nice of you to drop in, thanks for the info. I'll try and incorporate the new stuff when I start subbing (up to now I haven't even found the time to read the piece). I'll get back to you when I'm finished with subbing or if something is unclear.

SchrEck Inc.

Hi Pete,

I've now done some subbing - if you like to have a look? I've taken your last version over at A 963353 as a basis. If you spot something that needs attention, please drop me a note.

SchrEck Inc.

Most of the changes seem sensible The only problems I can see are a spurious full stop in "i.e.., German"; an unmached parenthesis near the end; and that 'standalone' is usually a single word or hyphenated, in my experience. Oh, and the quotation marks, but that's a style issue I'll have to bow to.

Nice to see it's virtually unchanged

Hi Pete,

consider this changed.

SchrEck Inc.