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MShades

Looks good - I see you've added links for World War 2 and New Year's. I hadn't even thought of that....

The only thing I noticed - and I'm surprised I didn't notice it before - is in the paragraph on festivals. The relevant line reads: "...and take splace on 15 May." It should be "takes place."

Other than that, it all looks good. Is there anything you think I should add?


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SchrEck Inc.

Thanks! Consider the type corrected; I also couldn't think of anything else to add. smiley - smiley


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MShades

Groovy. Many thanks for taking this on.... smiley - smiley


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