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bobstafford Started conversation Jun 3, 2010
Have a peek at this please A66876691 and let me know what you think
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Lanzababy - Guide Editor Posted Jun 3, 2010
Hi Bob
at a very quick glance I would suggest that your footnote 7 should be a subheader, rather than a footnote - possibly in the form of a table.
Roman Fleet Referance List
---> typo on [Reference] by the way
Same with footnote 8
Lost bases
These two new parts are just too long to be footnotes, which should really be just one sentence, possibly two.
I've not really got much time till after the weekend to go through it properly, but did notice spelling errors for [beaches}
beach = sea ea in both words
Beech = tree ee in both words
I'll have another closer look when I've got a spare minute or two!
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bobstafford Posted Jun 5, 2010
OK opinions as to content and stuff it has been said that avoiding the list type is better so here goes
A69529701 Edit ENTRY 6 The Provinces Of Roman Britain -
A69452175 Edit ENTRY 5 The Classis Britannica -
A69451572 Edit ENTRY 4 The Ships of the Roman Fleet -
A69451374 Edit ENTRY 3 Roman Navy Ranks -
A69449962 Edit ENTRY 2 The Fleets Roman Of The Roman Empire -
A69448440 Edit ENTRY 1 The Roman Navy
Your opinion is welcome...
There could be more added so if there is any comment like its a bit skimpy dont worry...
By the way I know it could go as a uni entry I need to be persuaded its worth the bother I have 3 already
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