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A87778327 - When the blind lead the blind
broe jr-braiiiiiiiiinnnnssss Started conversation Nov 25, 2012
Entry: When the blind lead the blind - A87778327
Author: broe jr-braiiiiiiiiinnnnssss - U4983780
first time posting in AWW, but i've had this reviewed before and im no stranger to criticism. so be either honest or a very good liar
A87778327 - When the blind lead the blind
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Dec 10, 2012
I'm confused by the ending. The rest of the poem seems to be calling for action, then you seem to be giving up?
By and large, I'm getting mixed messages here.
Thanks for posting, by the way. We need more poetry and more poetry discussions.
A87778327 - When the blind lead the blind
broe jr-braiiiiiiiiinnnnssss Posted Dec 23, 2012
i didnt nesesarilly have a clear direction when i wrote this, i just opened the connection between my pen and my heart and let it flow. but now that i look at it, i see your point with it kind of changing direction at the end. thanks for pointing that out. ill be posting more poetry over this week i think, so keep an eye peeled for it if you enjoyed this one. thanks!
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