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A87734983 - Time for a Change

Post 1

Willem

Entry: Time for a Change - A87734983
Author: Willem - U168712

Hello, here's a little science fiction story I wrote. What do you folks think - any suggestions?

Thanks you very much

Willem


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Post 2

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Willem. Ahem. It's 2:30 in the afternoon over here, and I should not be shedding a tear. smiley - cry

But I am, and it's your fault.

This is a beautiful story, thank you. When I come to collect all the scifi challenge stories, the readers of smiley - thepost will cry, too.

Would you do me a favour, please, and go start at thread at the bottom of this page? A87717720 So it will be your thread, and the visitors to the Science Fiction Workshop will see this one there, too? Thanks. smiley - smiley (We're trying to get the Challenge stories on that page, the Prof's got one already.)


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Post 3

minorvogonpoet

This is beautiful and sad. smiley - applause


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Post 4

Willem

Hello Dmitri and Minorvogonpoet - thank you, thank you very much ... there's nothing more I can wish for in a story, than that it touched someone.


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Post 5

aka Bel - A87832164

Love the idea. I'm sure it would help world peace and protection of environment if everybody could experience the world in the skin of somebody else. smiley - smiley


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Post 6

Willem

Hi there Bel! Thanks for reading and for your comment. How I see it, the further we can go towards living or at least imagining ourselves in other skins, the better!


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Post 7

aka Bel - A87832164

Yes, understanding others, or at least making the effort to try is the right step forward. smiley - smiley


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Post 8

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

And...just to be all official and everything, this is also in this week's smiley - thepost. A87736800


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Post 9

aka Bel - A87832164

You're right, of course. But I made my way through all the stories in here, and through the backlog, so I commented here. smiley - blush


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Post 10

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - laugh Nothing wrong with that, at all. smiley - hug

Just putting it in 'for the record'.


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Post 11

aka Bel - A87832164

Yes, I tend to forget doing that when we pick an entry form here for smiley - thepost.


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