A Conversation for The Alternative Writing Workshop

A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 1

Mike McCulloch

Entry: A room with a tap - A7569156
Author: Mike McCulloch - U246476

Foresight isn't always a good thing.


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 2

frontiersman

This is fiction of course; isn't it?

Good yarn you've woven here!


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 3

Spiff


Wow! I really like this. I'm not at all sure that I've 'understood' exactly where you're coming from (or going to!), but I like the style and phrasing, I like the narrative tone and I love the way it works within the limitations of a single page format! smiley - ok

In short, I don't know what inspired this, but I like it. smiley - cheers

spiff


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 4

Phred Firecloud

I also thought that this was an excellent piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it.

-Phred


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 5

Tom tamer of the lion

brillant mate, It was really good, I cant think of any thing negative to say. Is there any cnance of another aticle as good as this? If not I will have to make do with this one.


smiley - cider


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 6

Mike McCulloch

Thanks guys. I'm glad you liked it. The inspiration for this was the amazing results you get from Young's two-slit experiment. Does the photon have a kind of fuzzy foresight!? Anyway, Happy New Year!
Mike


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 7

PhantomCactus

'I sensed the change to fuzzy time'

and from there on in I was hooked - for every concise, precise moment.....

you know, Mike McCulloch I don't know where your life takes you, but I think you should be a writer

oh, you are already ....

thanks for 'A room with a tap'

Helensmiley - biggrin


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 8

UnderGuide Editors

Congratulations Mike smiley - bubblysmiley - smiley. 'A room with a tap' attracted the attention of a couple of Underguide Miners and has been picked for entry into the <./>underguide</.>. This will give it an outing on h2g2’s Front Page shortly.

An UnderGuide Gem Polisher will be in touch. They'll want to create a UG copy of this to link to from the front page. I notice you have a copyright note on the article. You wouldn't be able to edit or delete the UG copy so if that's a problem just let us know.

Gem Polishers also discuss any light polishing they think could be done, they'll talk to you about that.

Thank you for this - it's entertained a lot of people already. Hopefully more via the front page.


A7569156 - A room with a tap

Post 9

Phred Firecloud

Well done smiley - applause...smiley - cheers


Key: Complain about this post