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Peer Review: A711244 - BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART THREE

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Researcher 185809

Entry: BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART THREE - A711244
Author: JASMIN - U185809

how can i correct mistakes


A711244 - BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART THREE

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FABT - new venture A815654 Angel spoiler page

please see all previous comments,

to correct mistakes you press the edit entry button which appears next to your entry on your own page.

FABT


A711244 - BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART THREE

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FABT - new venture A815654 Angel spoiler page

by the way, if you put dracula in the search engine there is loads of stuff so i think you ought to do that and read what else is on the guide and make sure you dont overlap.

FABT


A711244 - BRAM STOKERS DRACULA MY VIEW PART THREE

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Smij - Formerly Jimster

I'm afraid I agree with the other posts to your entries, Jasmin. It's definitely not ready for Peer Review. I'd suggest you put this through the Writer's Workshop to get some help on the structure of it.

All three of these entries could easily be put into one Entry though, to be honest. Each one could appear under a different header, which might help you sort out each of the entries so they flow a bit better - at the moment it kind of reads like random comments with no real sense of progression. Good attempt though, keep it up!

Jimster


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