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A77218879 - The White Worm Turns

Post 1

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Entry: The White Worm Turns - A77218879
Author: Magwitch - Runnin With The Devil - U780990

I'm taking this too literally aren't I?

Nevermind, CC beat me to it anyway smiley - silly


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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

Okay, this is getting creepy. smiley - rofl

But creepy in a good way, of course. smiley - whistle At first I thought the green stuff was, er, an apple...I was hoping for a butterfly...oh, heck, who cares? That's a wild and wonderful journey.

I have only one crit: 'its' for possessive, not 'it's'. (You can do a find-and-replace.)

I can't wait to see what Bel and MVP can do with a white worm. smiley - winkeye


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Post 3

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

My spell checker was saying that to me, Dmitri, I didn't believe it.

Oh what a smiley - jester I feel

I'll correct it now.


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Post 4

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - laugh That's the single most frustrating confusion in typing history.

The reason? We only invented the word 'its' in the 19th Century. Before that, it was 'his'. smiley - doh

My mnemonic: it is=it's.

Elektra is awful. She just asked me if I wanted spaghetti for supper. smiley - roflsmiley - roflsmiley - rofl

I was brave, and said yes.


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Post 5

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

White worms and Flesh flies in tomato sauce, sweetie?

smiley - drool


smiley - silly


smiley - run


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Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

You'd better smiley - run, you monster...smiley - rofl


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Post 7

minorvogonpoet

This is definitely creepy. But proves you can write a story from any pov if your try hard enough.

Well done.

smiley - smiley


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Post 8

cactuscafe

smiley - rofl

I love this place. The AWW. smiley - rofl. If I look away for a few hours, I know that, on return, I will find that something entirely peculiar will have occurred. This helps me.

So, the fact that the place has currently broken out in white worms is quite in order. Quite in order.

yes! yes!

Attention! Little-mouth is amongst us! There was my life before Little-mouth and now there is now. That is very zen smiley - zen. Now there is now. The now of the Little-mouth. I take these things seriously. They affect me. It is because of writers. Imagine the world with no writers. No Little-mouth. No nature made weird and no weird made nature. No fiction turned contradiction. No dream made word. No word made dream. No nothing like that. And no this and that. And no cake smiley - cake and no ache and no .........

You get the picture. smiley - rofl

Nice one, Magwitch

ccsmiley - choc


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Post 9

Josh Clarke - The Auburn Time Lord

Magwitch,
Wow. What can I say? Haunting and beautiful.
This is definitely art.
smiley - tardis


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