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A67069326 - For Sale (o.n.o)

Post 1

sinnerman pfank

Entry: For Sale (o.n.o) - A67069326
Author: sinnerman pfank - U9260985


Evening

If only life came with subtitles.....(PtI)

SP


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Post 2

TRiG (Ireland) A dog, so bade in office

I like it.

smiley - ok


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Post 3

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Me too, it reminds of somewhere I used to live a few years ago. Thank the goddess I only rented at the time. I'd never have sold that place! smiley - rofl


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Post 4

orland

Clever. Has potential too; as you allude. (Call centres....wedding vows....driving lessons......televised election debates??...)

How often do you think "estate agent" comes up in school career's discussions, as option of choice?.....


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Post 5

Lanzababy - Guide Editor

ha ha ha ha! smiley - rofl thanks! made me smile smiley - biggrin


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Post 6

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

smiley - roflsmiley - roflsmiley - rofl

Rare and wonderful. I just read it aloud, and Elektra laughed - so you're road-tested.

The tramp was the piece de resistance - excellent touch.smiley - winkeye


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Post 7

minorvogonpoet

smiley - laugh This gets the estate-agent talk just right.

One of my favourite expressions is 'deceptively spacious' which I've always taken to mean 'smaller than you think'.)


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Post 8

Post Team

Hi sinnerman, I'm delighted to tell you that your great piece is currently being published in <./>ThePost</.>

You can find it at A68217960

smiley - thepost
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