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A4188567 - Leaving Me Behind...

Post 1

worldcitizen3133

Entry: Leaving Me Behind... - A4188567
Author: worldcitizen3133 - U1522446

This is just a poem that I wanted perfected before I send it into any contests.


A4188567 - Leaving Me Behind...

Post 2

J

Good stuff smiley - smiley
I liked the first two lines especially.

Keep on truckin' smiley - ok

smiley - blacksheep


A4188567 - Leaving Me Behind...

Post 3

worldcitizen3133

Thanks!! I thought of those two lines after I had gotten done running one time, and I was dizzy, so I thought of those lines, and was like, "cool! That would be a good poem line!"


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Post 4

J

smiley - laugh
I believe that. It is a good line, I think.

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 5

worldcitizen3133

thanks!


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