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Leopardskinfynn... sexy mama Posted Jun 2, 2005
Hi dude 
I liked this. Sorry, no constructive advice right now!
I spotted a typo:
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That should probably be Too many dreams.
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dudeintheUniverse Posted Jun 2, 2005
Thanks for noting the typo. I'm glad to see that someone liked it.
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U1250369 Posted Jun 2, 2005
I found this very touching. It plucked at a string in my heart.
In fact, I felt a tear bedim my eye.
Well done dude 
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Mrs Zen Posted Jun 6, 2005
Ah, this is more like it dude!
You'll see from my comments on "To the Artist" that I found the other piece hard to read. This one is better structured, and works better as a result.
It wouldn't suffer from the same process of tough revision that I recommend for the other one, but it is much nearer a finished state than that one is.
What do you want to do with them? Do you have any more? It would be interesting to see a series of them in one place, but only if they said substantially different things.
Interesting pieces though, and thanks for posting them here.
Ben
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J Posted Jun 12, 2005
Good advice, eloquently given.
To the writer
Keep writing.
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