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A47211707 - Excruciated

Post 1

Trout Montague

Entry: Excruciated - A47211707
Author: Trout Montague - U188966

Excruciating to be sure.

But I'll gladly throw it away and make another one.


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Post 2

LL Waz

Very 'nuff said.


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Post 3

minorvogonpoet

Succinct! smiley - smiley

I must admit that I'm not sure what I'd do with your words! Biennial might be possible but Platini-esque? smiley - erm

Perhaps we should challenge these judges to write their own Valentines and dig out some particularly tricky words for the purpose! smiley - evilgrin


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Post 4

Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor

I like it.smiley - smiley

Says it all, really. Gets at the basic Darwinian, relentless struggle, the uselessness of sentiment, the fact that love is really just appetite in disguise, the utterly horrible reducibility of it all...with an indirect nod to the underlying poststructuralism of previous efforts in this forum...

...without using any big words other than the title.smiley - winkeye

Thank you.

They won't let you get away with that last word, though.


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Post 5

Tibley Bobley

How can she resistsmiley - huh


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Post 6

TRiG (Ireland) A dog, so bade in office

I like it!

TRiG.smiley - erm


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Post 7

Trout Montague

Thanks. It was too much of a risk to put it on the rack though.


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Post 8

TRiG (Ireland) A dog, so bade in office

It has a definite punch.

TRiG.smiley - smiley


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