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Trin Tragula Posted Jan 11, 2007
Four very effective lines, though. I really liked the language in this, the jumbling, the density of it - and I liked the way it ended especially (not the word you'd expect, but, again, very effective).
Thanks for putting it in the AWW 
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Wayne Craig Fredericks Posted Jan 16, 2007
You're welcomed and rethanked.
Have you read my catcaught poem?
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Trin Tragula Posted Feb 7, 2007
I have now (sorry, got a bit confused there).
The ending of that one too - that last line is an absolute knockout!
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mindchatham Posted Jul 6, 2007
I can't resist using the much too much cliched term short, sweet, and to the point to describe this.
The poem, consisting of four lines, completely enlightened my frame of mind when I read it. That's very good, by the way. Your style of writing just blew me away.
Spring never seemed so springy.
MC
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Wayne Craig Fredericks Posted Jul 18, 2007
Thanks to you both for finding this.
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