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A10518518 - Sometimes I wish

Post 1

Woodpigeon

Entry: Sometimes I wish - A10518518
Author: Woodpigeon - U30129

I just wrote this, and am happy to have others take a look at it.

Cheers,

Woodpigeon


A10518518 - Sometimes I wish

Post 2

Xantief

Hi Woodpigeon,

You must have been to these places; I can relate. I like the 'frozen waves of stone'.

Haiku.

If you forgive me for being persnickety, it's 'taut string' vice 'taught'.

smiley - cheers and praying for sun in Cali....


A10518518 - Sometimes I wish

Post 3

Woodpigeon

Hi Xantief, Thank you! I have not been to most these places. Its a wish to do this though - a very strong one.

Typo changed - thanks for that too.

smiley - cheersW


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