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J Posted Mar 21, 2003
On the last line, to should be too
And it's lovely otherwise 
!
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a girl called Ben Posted Jul 18, 2003
*bumping this up to the top*
When I first read this I described it as "a call to arms" - but of course, that is excactly what it isn't. It is, however, a warning to us all.
Thank you for putting it in the AWW - and such a shame it has languished for so long.
B
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J Posted Jul 21, 2003
I stand by my point a few months ago, but now I also see it as somewhat powerful poem.
I don't know if this was the intention, but it came accross that way to me
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J Posted Jul 21, 2003
Mostly it was rather passive, which it fine, but the last line made me feel this way
I like "Because before to long the future will hit you"
I dunno. Somehow powerful to me.
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Vicki Virago - Proud Mother Posted Jul 21, 2003
Now I see....I understand....thank you.
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SomeMuppet Posted Jul 27, 2003
I think this is excellent. Brilliant imagery powerfully put together.
Nothing else to say really
Thanks for posting it Vicky
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