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A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
Clelba Started conversation Feb 23, 2002
Entry: Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech - A594768
Author: Clelba [Patron Saint, Muse, Keeper, Thingite and Cat] DISCLAIMER: knows nothing about anything and therefore can't be laughed at - U139455
erm...a joint effort on a poem made from clichés by me and a non-h2g2 friend
there may be more less clichéd but equally weird ones to follow...
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A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
Martin Harper Posted Feb 26, 2002
Somehow that felt like a pretty sexy poem - especially the second section. I did wonder though - doesn't nubile mean naked? How can darkness be nubile if sie's wearing a velvet dress?
A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
Clelba Posted Mar 5, 2002
hey, nobody said it had to make sense
it's just a bit of fun, to make of it what you will...i'm pretty sure that sentence doesn't make sense either
but yeh, you could be right...(but just to let you know, anyhting you don't like about it was done by chloe, not me )
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A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
a girl called Ben Posted Feb 25, 2003
I always thought nubile meant of marriagable age.
This is the sort of poem I love but find challenging, there is so much that is sensuous in it that my mind loses track of where it is. I liked it, but I could not tell you what it was about. However, I am pretty sure other denizens of AWW will like it too, so I am bumping it up to the top of the page so that they can do so.
Thanks for posting it. I am looking forward to re-reading it a few times as I get to know it better.
Ben
A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
Kat - From H2G2 Posted Jan 21, 2005
Wow! This has been hanging around a LONG time with no comments! No wonder the author's gone AWOL!
Move out of AWW anyone?
A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
Kat - From H2G2 Posted Jan 21, 2005
*coughs*
Come on someone....
A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech
nadia Posted Jan 21, 2005
Sorry, I was at the other end of the list.
Seconded.
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