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A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 1

Clelba

Entry: Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech - A594768
Author: Clelba [Patron Saint, Muse, Keeper, Thingite and Cat] DISCLAIMER: knows nothing about anything and therefore can't be laughed at - U139455

erm...a joint effort on a poem made from clichés by me and a non-h2g2 friend
there may be more less clichéd but equally weird ones to follow...
^. .^
= ' =


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 2

Martin Harper

smiley - smiley
Somehow that felt like a pretty sexy poem - especially the second section. I did wonder though - doesn't nubile mean naked? How can darkness be nubile if sie's wearing a velvet dress? smiley - huh


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 3

Clelba

hey, nobody said it had to make sense smiley - tongueout
it's just a bit of fun, to make of it what you will...i'm pretty sure that sentence doesn't make sense either smiley - erm
but yeh, you could be right...(but just to let you know, anyhting you don't like about it was done by chloe, not me smiley - winkeye)
^. .^
= ' =


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 4

a girl called Ben

I always thought nubile meant of marriagable age.

This is the sort of poem I love but find challenging, there is so much that is sensuous in it that my mind loses track of where it is. I liked it, but I could not tell you what it was about. However, I am pretty sure other denizens of AWW will like it too, so I am bumping it up to the top of the page so that they can do so.

Thanks for posting it. I am looking forward to re-reading it a few times as I get to know it better.

Ben
smiley - brr


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 5

Kat - From H2G2

Wow! This has been hanging around a LONG time with no comments! No wonder the author's gone AWOL!

Move out of AWW anyone?


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 6

Kat - From H2G2

*coughs*

Come on someone....


A594768 - Gooseberries - A Poem by Clare Baldwin and Chloe Beech

Post 7

nadia

Sorry, I was at the other end of the list.

Seconded.
N


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