h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A591211
This is a short piece inspired by a song by Howard Jones, on how God is really waiting to be found. I'd like to know what my peers think! (I think it's good, of course.)

Hi! Interesting entry piece. However, it doesn't quite fit in with the guidelines for entries for the Edited Guide. Even without being in the Edited Guide, though, everyone can see your entry everytime they search for "God" or look at your personal space.

If you really want to get an entry into the Edited Guide, I'd suggest you take a look at the Writer's Guidelines and the Peer Review guidelines

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/Writing-Guidelines
http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/PeerReview

If you're just looking for feedback on your entry, a good place to try would be the "Alternative Writing Workshop".

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A581393


Mikey

Aye. So what shall we do with this then, sin bin it (it is in the wrong format) or move it over ot the AWW?

Move it to the AWW. It is a nice entry, it's just not really Edited Guide material.

Trouble is the title of the forum will still be in the wrong format but I'm easy

I'd second the move.


Mikey

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This thread has been moved to the 'real' AWW - sorry about that!

hi,


Although I am a registered agnostic I thought this piese was very good.

there is one point I woild like to make however
the sentence "I'm only as involved as I wanna be outlook" just doesn't scan well. I am not sure exactly what you are trying to say here!

Apart from that a very good piece, very succinct.

Della, are you still subscribed? you don't seem to have posted here in a while.

Well I like this. It's a nice fluid little piece.

CAC perhaps?

Speckly

To be frankfully brute, I found the convo hanging off it much more interesting. But you do as you wish. You can CAC it if you want to.

I, too, found this very interesting. It seems a little short though, perhaps some of the stuff in the convo could be added (haven't read it yet, just going by Don't count's message that it is good.

(egnever lisnot), if you please.
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