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A55132274 - Blast Off Chapter Two
adsadam345 Started conversation Jul 31, 2009
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Author: adsadam345 - U14084478
Chapter three. As I promised a longer chapter and hopefully a better one. This is where the story actually get's interesting.
A55132274 - Blast Off Chapter Two
Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Jul 31, 2009
Funny.
Have you gone back and read the dialogue from Apollo 12?
My favourite quote: 'Whee!'
A55132274 - Blast Off Chapter Two
minorvogonpoet Posted Aug 1, 2009
Yes. The dialogue has a real feel - banal and undistinguished 
But I want Tom and James to be clearly differentiated. At the moment, I'm not sure who's saying what.
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