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A5056508 - Dryad

Post 1

Flame

Entry: Dryad - A5056508
Author: Flameisgold - U1652413

This is my ending to the story of Dryad, a competition I entered in 2004. Joanne Harris wrote the start of the story, and the challenge was to complete an ending for the story in 1200 words or less.




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Post 2

Spynxxx

From the first reading I was struck with the conviction that this ending is a story unto itself, standing as proud and tall as the beech itself and deserving of recognition on it's own merits as a full and complete work.

The emotions convied bring this piece to life, the sentiment so richly expressed having true impact on anyone who has ever been in a relationship before. Even now I can recall my last 'disaggrement' with my significant other and feel remorse, vowing that the next time, and of course there will be a next time as life isn't perfect, I will remember this piece and reign in my emotion, tempering my anger with compassion.

And so once again personal growth is found amidst the carfully crafted words of a true artist. My thanks to the author for the gift of this wonderful story, I am now a richer man for the reading.

Spynxxxsmiley - fullmoon


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Post 3

Phred Firecloud

Loved the unpredictable finish. Found it necessary to continue reading once begun. Good stuff.

-Phred


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Post 4

frontiersman

Hello Flame,

My two colleagues have said it all.
They won't mind my endorsing their remarks, I'm sure!

I feel the same about this story as I did about your last one: utterly professional. If only I could compete, but we can't all be as good as you!

Each to his/her own strengths, I say.

You have got us batting for you!

You haven't spotted the one error: 'happens' (in second paragraph of your synopsis)

f.


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Post 5

Flame

Thanks everyone for reading this entry, and indeed your comments. smiley - biggrin


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Post 6

Xantief

How many hands have held that sketchbook? It's evil, I tells ya! Eeevil!!

Well done!


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Post 7

Flame

smiley - laugh Thanks. It certainly could be.


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