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Al, I haven't given an overview straight under the Header 'Method', but I've incorporated your suggestions into the steps.

I was thinking perhaps a very brief run-down of Manmurs process could go there (under 'Method'), but I can't really get my head around it very well.

Do you think you might be able to suggest something? Or is it okay as is?

Entry: How To Extract Your Own DNA - A25442354
Author: Matt the Hoopy - U168592

For easier 'extraction'

Well, I guess it's as it is. But you could try putting exactly what I put into Post 17 as the para immediately before 'I need a swab'

*rummages through *

Sorry Al, that would break up the flow and feel of the Entry doing that.

I want it to read less like a textbook and more off the cuff

I think I'll leave it as is

Have you got something in your handbag dear?

Oh yes http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/F3766100?thread=4126190&skip=20&show=20

I've bought a bigger since then!

I clicked on it expecting it to be blocked for breaking the house rules somehow

I'd not noticed it was one of Matt's entries you see if I had I'd have known before hand it was going to be another of his fascinating and well written entries! Top marks

Must try it one day...

Thanks Cardi

Credit's not all mine though The Old Berks helped out too.

I mean OldBerk and Big Al

Good job you corrected yourself quickly there

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