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A23623238 - Seaweed

Post 21

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

Here's the link to the BBC Food site for Sea Trout with Laver Bread smiley - drool

http://www.bbc.co.uk/food/recipes/database/saladofseatroutwithl_82001.shtml

smiley - smiley


A23623238 - Seaweed

Post 22

U168592

Thanks for all that Al, I've updated and added you as a contributor smiley - ok


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Post 23

U168592

Found out my toothpaste has carraganeen in it! smiley - laugh

Think I might be done here now smiley - ok


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Post 24

Rudest Elf


Please consider the following first: smiley - smiley

Intro 2nd para 2nd line: [don't have roots]

Intro 2nd para 6th line: ['free-floating', using]

Intro 3rd para 3rd line: [more about them.]

Intro 3rd para 4th line: [seaside]

Eating It 2nd line: [flavour - a bit like]

Eating It 4th line: [nori, a protein-rich alga]

Eating It 2nd para 3rd line: [upwards]

Eating It 2nd para last sentence:
[This practice is common in Ireland and Scotland - the seaweeds used are green or purple laver, or sloke (a sort of marine spinach).]

Eating It 3rd para: I think the paragraph might read better if you made <(named after the abundant supply of red seaweed, or 'Irish Moss', that can be found along the Irish coast near the town of Carragheen)> part of footnote 5, and then rephrased the rest... (but, then again, perhaps I've been on too long smiley - online2long )

Footnote 2: [Vitamins]


smiley - reindeer


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Post 25

U168592

smiley - cheers Rudy - all dealt with I think smiley - smiley


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Post 26

Rudest Elf


smiley - ok

Just this one left:

Eating It 4th line: [a protein-rich alga]


smiley - reindeer


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Post 27

U168592

*puts on his thick accent*

Sorted. smiley - ok


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Post 28

Rudest Elf


smiley - biggrin

smiley - reindeer


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Post 29

U168592

Added some more to this about photosynthesis and stuff.

Think it's ready now smiley - smiley


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Post 30

Rudest Elf


Better & better! smiley - smiley

Please consider the following amendments:

Seaweed - Giver of Life

2nd line: [life-giving oxygen]

4th line: [to breathe]

5th line: (Best not to clean the scum)?


smiley - reindeer


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Post 31

U168592

Done, thanks RE smiley - smiley


A23623238 - Seaweed

Post 32

Rudest Elf


Don't mention it, Matt. Anything to make the Hoopy happy. smiley - ok

smiley - reindeer


A23623238 - Seaweed

Post 33

U168592

ah, it's not hard to make me happy. It's making me angry that's hard to do. smiley - smiley


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Post 34

Mina

Looks good! My dog likes to have a little chomp on seaweed, but after seeing it piled up on the beach at Broadstairs covered in flies last weekend I think I'll pass.


A23623238 - Seaweed

Post 35

U168592

smiley - laugh

ooo, tasty!


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Post 36

U168592

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