A Conversation for Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days

Peer Review: A23207735 - Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days

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Fizzymouse- no place like home

Entry: Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days - A23207735
Author: Fizzymouse - Your amazing grACE!! - With someone else's busy schedule! - U1899683


This is part two of part one .... smiley - silly


Comments welcomed.smiley - ok


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A23207735 - Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days

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U168592

um, the 'waking dream' I think had something to do with the copious brandy and opium the party had consumed if I recall the story smiley - winkeye


A23207735 - Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days

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U168592

Oh, very good btw smiley - winkeye


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Fizzymouse- no place like home



Thanks Matt - footnote added.smiley - ok


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Fizzymouse- no place like home



Some links added .... if anyone can spot any more it'd be a help.smiley - ok


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A23207735 - Mary Shelley - The Decadent Days

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Icy North

Hi Fizzy - I love this section - an amazing romp through the complex private lives of the literary. It almost needs a diagram! smiley - ok

Nitpicks:

Unless you meant it as a witty variant, it should be cause célèbre. In fact, can a person be a cause célèbre? It's usually attributed to an issue.

remove the comma

bankroll

Sounds a bit clumsy, do you think?


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Fizzymouse- no place like home

Thanks again Icy, I've fixed everything except the cause celebre - for one reason I can't do those little accents.smiley - rolleyes The other thing is he was a bit of a *issue* he was almost a charity case - anti-god, anti-marriage, anti-establishment, apparently lived most of his life on handouts from supporters like Percy who hung on his every word.smiley - grovel

What do you think, is there a better way to describe him.smiley - huh


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Fizzymouse- no place like home



Got the accents sortedsmiley - ok


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Congrats!! smiley - bubbly


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Yay! smiley - magic

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Fizzymouse- no place like home



*falls over*


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