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A11420920 - Marvin Turns To The Dark Side
Eposina Started conversation May 1, 2006
Entry: Marvin Turns To The Dark Side - A11420920
Author: Eposina - U2280458
The seventh chapter of the continuing series of Marvin Turns To The Dark Side, of which I am very proud of as it has done so well.
A11420920 - Marvin Turns To The Dark Side
Tom tamer of the lion Posted May 2, 2006
great, your writing improves every time I read it, you have really thought alot about this one, I could actually see the unicorns being a Dr Who eposide and the fact that you have done some reasurch into a comedy that is before your time "red dwarth"this is increadable writing it has a warm feeling about it, thanks for writing this because it has made my all ready good day a bit better 
A11420920 - Marvin Turns To The Dark Side
Tom tamer of the lion Posted May 2, 2006
right now I have time to calm down, the one thing i would say is that it could be good to have some extra information on the unicorns, such as what there world is like, how they traveld to earth stuf like that, but its still a really great sub plot, it could easly become a Dr who eposide
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Eposina Posted May 3, 2006
I like that idea, I might do a spin-off series with the unicorns/unicads as the main plot.
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Tom tamer of the lion Posted May 3, 2006
yeah, it would be quite cool, shame the Dr hasn't got something like the guide, so he could just look up the species, the problem with that is that he knows them all anyway
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Eposina Posted May 4, 2006
He obiviously has Marvin's brain, well he'd have to... to remember all those species!
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Tom tamer of the lion Posted May 4, 2006
that could be a really good twist, Marvin and the Doctor are brothers 
, or there was a big accident and they now share a brain could work
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U1250369 Posted May 4, 2006
Another cliff hanger ending Eposina !
Can't wait for episode 8
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cupati Posted May 5, 2006
Yay! Lovvit!
“Bill, bill, death threat, urgent, bill,” = genius!
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U1250369 Posted May 5, 2006
Totally agree. I read it twice and screamed with laughter
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Eposina Posted May 5, 2006
Thanks guys!! These compliments are making me blush like I'm sunburnt!
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Tom tamer of the lion Posted May 6, 2006
hey u deserve them its a great series.
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