h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Gaze

My feet are worn and my hart is heavy
Look upon me make me wary
is it a look of love or a look of hate
a single most distance stare that meet my chest
a jumbled mind that wishes for the wet
her look upon me is medusas gaze
a star so frightening it paralyzes me beyond all care
I cannot concentrate
I cannot think
I cannot speck
walk forward does my bravery but he is no use
against the star of the medusas gaze he is no match
for again I sit there paralyzed beyond all care

On the bus
In the classroom
In the office tower that touches stars that loom
beyond infinity of all that gaze
its concentrated on me on that day
I see the view that we all perceive in the gaze of light and there is not escape
they say the eyes are the window to the soul
I am trapped in yours and beyond all call
try and speak to me and you will see
that beyond you there is me

I have to fight
I know thats right
to win your love on this night
the window in the door and the gaze that meets the flour
let us dance to the shower of the morn
let us drink to the heavens above
but baby don't look at me in that way
don't use that gaze
cause I will be lost forever
within your soul

I like the end of the second to last verse best.

Yeah the last verse is a bit wishy washy

Yes, but it fits.

I didn't think it did actually... whatever you say

You're the one who wrote it!

Yes, doesn't mean i can't be critical of it?

True.

Its not my best work, thats for sure

There I can agree. Nevertheless, very nice.

Somehow I don't think its as bad a Ian Adersons Panama freighter

You do get many points for that.

yes mostly for spelling

That, too.

:P