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Peer Review: A777017 - The Catalina affair

Post 1

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

Entry: The Catalina affair - A777017
Author: Captain A.J. Rimmer ACE, Scout and space adventurer - U189740

I'm pretty sure this meets the guidelines.


A777017 - The Catalina affair

Post 2

Giford

Hmm, yes, short and to the point!

I see no reason why this shouldn't go into the guide. You might like to tidy up the spelling and grammar, and perhaps break up the single big paragraph a bit, but otherwise it seems like a good overview of a minor cold war incident I knew nothing about.

Gif smiley - geek


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Post 3

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

There done...


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Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

Perhaps break up those big paragraphs into smaller bits, but that's about it smiley - smiley


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Post 5

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

I'm afraid I'm not quite sure what you mean by paragraph?


A777017 - The Catalina affair

Post 6

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

I'm talking of those long sequences of letters taken from an alphabet, which you compose words of and then make sentences out of these, and finally make paragraphs out of the letter. They are called paragraphs because, ....er, because, ...... well, because GuideML has a -aragraph tag to separate them smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

Oh a P-A-R-A-G-R-A-P-H!
smiley - ok


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Post 8

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

smiley - laugh

Looks much better now!

'damged' should be 'damaged' and 'east sea' ought to read 'Baltic Sea'. The correct spelling of 'MIG' is 'MiG' (from Mikoyan Gura-something).

smiley - ok


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Post 9

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

Aaaannnnd DONE!


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Post 10

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Post 11

Nighthawk

"What happened to the DC-3 and there crew is still unknown."

The missing DC-3 was discovered during the summer of 2003 at the Baltic Sea bed. It had been missing for 51 years.

See link for further details about the recovery work(swedish only)
http://www.mil.se/article.php?id=9768


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Post 12

Ace Rimmer [pretending]

I know.
But I wrote this in 2002.


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