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Peer Review: A754832 - The Grow Bag

Post 1

Jaziniho ( Tom Green )

Entry: The Grow Bag - A754832
Author: Jaziniho ( Tom Green ) - U194904

Fairly short...shouldn't think it's something that requires a great deal of explaining though!
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tom


A754832 - The Grow Bag

Post 2

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

I like it, short and to the point. My only suggestion would be a mention of the sort of plants grown up them- tomatoes or whatever.


A754832 - The Grow Bag

Post 3

Spiff


Hi Jaz, smiley - ok

I read this and found it as you described. smiley - smiley

couple of typos for you: "will probably already three or four..."

"Simple transfer your plant into the soil "

oh, and I don't think you really need that subheader - it only repeats the title, after all.

hope this is helpful
spiff


A754832 - The Grow Bag

Post 4

Ashley



I love this type of entry - pithy and pertinent. Make the changes suggested above and I see no reason why it can't go into the Edited Guide. smiley - smiley

smiley - ok


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