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Peer Review: A754832 - The Grow Bag
Jaziniho ( Tom Green ) Started conversation May 22, 2002
Entry: The Grow Bag - A754832
Author: Jaziniho ( Tom Green ) - U194904
Fairly short...shouldn't think it's something that requires a great deal of explaining though!
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A754832 - The Grow Bag
Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences Posted Jun 14, 2002
I like it, short and to the point. My only suggestion would be a mention of the sort of plants grown up them- tomatoes or whatever.
A754832 - The Grow Bag
Spiff Posted Jun 14, 2002
Hi Jaz,
I read this and found it as you described.
couple of typos for you: "will probably already three or four..."
"Simple transfer your plant into the soil "
oh, and I don't think you really need that subheader - it only repeats the title, after all.
hope this is helpful
spiff
A754832 - The Grow Bag
Ashley Posted Jun 24, 2002
I love this type of entry - pithy and pertinent. Make the changes suggested above and I see no reason why it can't go into the Edited Guide.
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