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Peer Review: A749270 - The Alibi (San Diego, California)

Post 1

Greasy Pirate

Entry: The Alibi (San Diego, California) - A749270
Author: Greasy Pirate - U153210

This is a piece about my favorite bar in San Diego. It is short but I think it conveys the image of the bar without being to anally retentive.


A749270 - The Alibi (San Diego, California)

Post 2

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Hi Greasy Pirate!

I think it would help this piece if it were broken into paragraphs.

Is San Diego a big place? Would it be easy to find this bar? What's it like for women - you've described it purely from a male perspective.

What's a Big Dipper? Obviously a drink, but what kind?

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 3

Orcus

smiley - popcorn


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Post 4

Dr Hell

I like that entry, it's one of those bar-reviews - it's complete and nicely written.

HELL


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Post 6

Greasy Pirate

I can't tell you how good it is to be chosen. Thanks to you all.


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