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quizzical Started conversation Jul 21, 2005
Hi, Emmily!
You write the most interesting entries! I think I'm done subbing. Just tweaks again, mostly punctuation, and I moved the note about 100,000 detiologists in the UK to the nearby footnote. You can find the edited version at A4350971. Please have a look and let me know if you'd like to add or change anything.
Cheers! 
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Emmily ~ Roses are red, Peas are green, My face is a laugh, But yours is a scream Posted Jul 21, 2005
Cheers quizzical 
Looks great Thank You, 
The only small comment I'd make, and this is in the original, I just didn't notice it before, first para under the Header: 'Big Brother Censors Sauce' - "and decided on moral crackdown."
Would that read smoother as 'and decided on a moral crackdown.' 
I'll leave the decision with you, Thanks again.
Emmily 
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quizzical Posted Jul 22, 2005
You're right - I'll fix that sentence. I'll give the entry one last read tomorrow to make sure I've checked everything, then it's off to the Editors.
Have a good weekend...
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