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Post 1

Root

http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/A661178

A short biography of the Heavy Metal/Classic Cello quartet Apocalyptica. Any comments welcome, esp. proof-reading.
smiley - cheers


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Post 2

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

I'm listening to the first album right now.
Nothing really wrong with this entry. A little choppy.
Someone more informed than I can help you with format.
A little bit about what they did between forming and recording would be nice.
A little more about the striking quality of their effort in comparison to violin and cello quartets like Bronski and Kronos, etc.
There was an all-tuba quartet or quintet a few years ago. Not that it matters.
Or not. It's up to you. I'm just here to help.


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Post 3

Root

Thanks for the critique. I will do some more research next week.


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Post 4

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

otay


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Post 5

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

And?


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Post 6

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

and... now it's a case for the Flea Market...


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Post 7

Tonsil Revenge (PG)

murm-murm-murm
smiley - cry


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