A Conversation for The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
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Giford Started conversation Apr 18, 2007
Entry: The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists - A21842750
Author: Giford - U187177
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A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 19, 2007
Great entry Giford
I saw "Amazing Grace" a few weeks ago - an incredibly moving film I recommend to anybody. Your entry tells the story in more depth.
Nitpicks:
<> requires a question mark at the end.
Your footnote needs to start with a capital letter.
That's all
to read part three
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
Giford Posted Apr 20, 2007
Looked up how to put ampersands in the names of organisations, as correctly spelt.
Also put in oh-so-witty footnote about the long names.
Gif
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
Leo Posted Apr 20, 2007
Dunno if anyone's suggested this yet, but shouldn't you specify that this is in the USA?
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
Giford Posted Apr 20, 2007
Um...
... looks like I should probably specify that this is in the UK! I'll add it into Part One.
Gif
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
AlexAshman Posted Apr 24, 2007
eighteenth century equivalent of an investigative journalist
--> 18th Century
trained the sailors who made the British Navy great
- I think you mean Royal Navy. The British Navy ceased to exist when the UK became a monarchy again.
The second paragraph of the John Newton section has quite a few paratheses - is there any way you could cut down? 
Alex
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
Giford Posted Apr 25, 2007
Done.
Slightly modified my comments on Newton as slave-captain.
Gif
A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
AlexAshman Posted Apr 25, 2007
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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor Posted Apr 26, 2007
Congratulations Giford
great entry x2
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Peer Review: A21842750 - The Campaign to Abolish Slavery Part Two: The Abolitionists
- 1: Giford (Apr 18, 2007)
- 2: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Apr 19, 2007)
- 3: Giford (Apr 20, 2007)
- 4: Leo (Apr 20, 2007)
- 5: Giford (Apr 20, 2007)
- 6: AlexAshman (Apr 24, 2007)
- 7: Giford (Apr 25, 2007)
- 8: AlexAshman (Apr 25, 2007)
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- 11: Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor (Apr 26, 2007)
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