A Conversation for Battle of Flodden Field, September 9, 1513.
Peer Review: A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
toffees1888 (Irish evertonian of TBBCOE) Started conversation Apr 2, 2007
Entry: Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513. - A21337869
Author: toffees1888 (Irish evertonian of TTBCOE) - U2439349
I was looking for another entry to do, so thinking about history, I saw that h2g2 didn't have an article on this battle, so I decided to write this...
Now that Version 1.0 is done though, I'm not really sure where this stands...
how is it?
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
BMT Posted Apr 2, 2007
Hi Toffees, A good read but you need to re-word quite a bit of this it's too similar to this in places.(see link)
There are spelling issues but you need to deal with the above first soonest.
http://en.allexperts.com/e/b/ba/battle_of_flodden_field.htm
ST (scout)
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
toffees1888 (Irish evertonian of TBBCOE) Posted Apr 2, 2007
Here, hopefully it's a little better...
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Apr 2, 2007
It's a good historical piece. I hope any problems with content will be sorted soon.
In the meantime, can you please check all your dates for house style.
ie 9th September = 9 September,
August 22nd = 22 August,
remember to place a comma after the month.
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
lil ~ Auntie Giggles with added login ~ returned Posted Apr 2, 2007
Sorry, didn't mean to appear so abrupt 
I was previewing and hit Post rather quickly...
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
toffees1888 (Irish evertonian of TBBCOE) Posted Apr 4, 2007
Done the article up a bit more...
A21337869 - Battle of Flodden Field, September 9th, 1513.
toffees1888 (Irish evertonian of TBBCOE) Posted Apr 9, 2007
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