h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

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I like this entry because it sheds light on a popular misconception that has been going on for centuarys. I just believe that it deserves some clearing up.

LOL!

I wouldn't say much more than three centuries!

A promising start for an entry that's near to my heart. But so much more needs to be said!

The dialect - 'Throw the horse over the fence some hay.'
The cuisine - pig's stomach and funnel cakes
The Amish - driving horse-drawn carts down busy roadways
The Mennonite - driving cars with black bumpers for the same reasons the Amish drive horse-drawn carts

This is a great topic for a Guide entry - even without ever mentioning the tourist trap that is Lancaster County's Pennsylvania Dutch Country.

Please consider putting some more meat on this skeleton.

If you'd like, I might be able to lend a hand. I've lived in both Lebanon and Lancaster counties.

- X

I would be honored for you to lend a hand. I also shall add the suggestions you have already given.

So perhaps this entry should be moved to the writing workshop for further tweaking?

I suggest it gets moved either to the Writing Workshop or to the Sin Bin. The presentation title thingy is in the wrong format but that's probably me being pedantic .

Kenrick

The article shall be moved to the workshop when possible. Thank you to all that suggested it.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'The h2g2 Writing Workshop' to 'Peer Review Sin Bin'. This entry already has another thread in the Workshop at http://www.bbc.co.uk/h2g2/guide/F57153?thread=117999 which we've left active.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'Peer Review Sin Bin' to 'Pennsylvania Dutch'.

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