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Alternative Writing Workshop: A21061702 - The River
robertjstewart Started conversation Mar 23, 2007
Entry: The River - A21061702
Author: robertjstewart - U7880242
First contribution to the site, let's see if I get lucky!
A21061702 - The River
minorvogonpoet Posted Mar 23, 2007
Welcome to the AWW. This is thought provoking and well-written. I particularly liked the first sentence.
I wondered if it sagged in the middle a little though. Perhaps a little re-ordering would improve the structure.
A21061702 - The River
Bluebottle Posted Feb 12, 2017
As this has been deleted there's nothing to remain in AWW. Back to Entry.
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Dmitri Gheorgheni, Post Editor Posted Feb 12, 2017
The comments alone are intriguing. 
Maybe you could collect some of the best ones for 
?
I agree, back to Entry.
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